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What do you think. Is this e-mail just a slick sales pitch (a way of making money?) Or do you recon its got credible intentions?
The bottom line is that we would have to PAY for the work!
(Am I a sceptic - Or should I go for it - I dont know the answer...)
[FONT="]Dear [/FONT][FONT="]Richard[/FONT][FONT="],[/FONT]
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[FONT="]I was recently at the [/FONT][FONT="]National Homebuilding and Renovating Show[/FONT][FONT="] and I was quite taken by your business, so much so that I’ve been researching your company to find out a little more. The reason for contacting you is that I am currently working on a series of case study films about successful businesses to be featured on The Daily Telegraph’s website. It would appear that [/FONT][FONT="]365 Drills[/FONT][FONT="] has displayed some real innovation particularly during the recent economic downturn and I think you may have a really interesting story to tell (from a journalistic perspective). I’d like to organise a convenient time to find out more about your company and determine whether your story is strong enough to be turned into a high quality film for the website. [/FONT]
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[FONT="]The Daily Telegraph Business Club is seeking to expand the video content on its extremely successful website (www.telegraph.co.uk/businessclub ). In particular, they are interested in developing the series of Secrets of Success films on the site, as these are proving popular with visitors and attracting considerable traffic.[/FONT]
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[FONT="]Our Film Company (see more information on us at the end of the email) has been brought in to develop the documentaries, shoot and produce the films. Each five-minute film will focus on one company and look at what has made it so successful, the company’s business strategy and what differentiates them from the competition. From a Telegraph Business Club perspective, the films are designed to be engaging, informative and interesting business insights for visitors and members of the club. That means each film will be compellingly narrated and will include interviews with senior executives in the business to identify the strategy and emphasising the passion within the company.[/FONT]
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[FONT="]If we can come up with a compelling feature and make the documentary, you will be provided with a digital copy of the film for your own marketing purposes. You may wish to place it on your own website, send it to your clients or use it for recruitment purposes, etc. However you choose to use it, you will no doubt find it a powerful endorsement for your business.[/FONT]
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[FONT="]We are making 15 films in this series. We have already committed to make 7 of those films with the following companies: Land Rover, City & Guilds of London, Proco, Office Depot, Botanix, Phonak and Constantine. We are looking for a further 8 companies to work with.[/FONT]
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[FONT="]Until recently, these films have only been offered to full sponsors of the Telegraph Business Club. But the Telegraph Business Club is now very keen to build on the popularity of the site’s video content.
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[FONT="]As a result, the 15 companies to feature in this series of films will not need to pay the full sponsorship fee.
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[FONT="]Is this the killer line guys:
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[FONT="]Instead they only need to cover the cost of creating the film. This cost will depend on the filming and production required, but an initial conversation will give us enough information so that we may provide a project estimate.[/FONT]
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The Telegraph Business Club is hugely supportive of the project, having seen the success of the previous films we have made. The client covers the cost of the film production and the distribution, but The Telegraph Business Club covers the cost of the in paper and online promotion.
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[FONT="]We are contacting approximately 40 companies in this phase to find the additional 8 that we would like to make films about. We have agreed with the Telegraph Business Club that we will work on a first come first served basis. We will work with the first 8 companies we find to have good success stories and are happy to share in the costs of producing the films.[/FONT]
[FONT="] [/FONT]
[FONT="]Please call or email me as soon as possible with some suitable times for us to speak and to explore whether this is an opportunity worth pursuing.[/FONT]
[FONT="] [/FONT]
[FONT="]Kind Regards,[/FONT]
(Film Company - Names removed in case of legal mumbo jumbo)
The bottom line is that we would have to PAY for the work!
(Am I a sceptic - Or should I go for it - I dont know the answer...)
[FONT="]Dear [/FONT][FONT="]Richard[/FONT][FONT="],[/FONT]
[FONT="] [/FONT]
[FONT="]I was recently at the [/FONT][FONT="]National Homebuilding and Renovating Show[/FONT][FONT="] and I was quite taken by your business, so much so that I’ve been researching your company to find out a little more. The reason for contacting you is that I am currently working on a series of case study films about successful businesses to be featured on The Daily Telegraph’s website. It would appear that [/FONT][FONT="]365 Drills[/FONT][FONT="] has displayed some real innovation particularly during the recent economic downturn and I think you may have a really interesting story to tell (from a journalistic perspective). I’d like to organise a convenient time to find out more about your company and determine whether your story is strong enough to be turned into a high quality film for the website. [/FONT]
[FONT="] [/FONT]
[FONT="]The Daily Telegraph Business Club is seeking to expand the video content on its extremely successful website (www.telegraph.co.uk/businessclub ). In particular, they are interested in developing the series of Secrets of Success films on the site, as these are proving popular with visitors and attracting considerable traffic.[/FONT]
[FONT="] [/FONT]
[FONT="]Our Film Company (see more information on us at the end of the email) has been brought in to develop the documentaries, shoot and produce the films. Each five-minute film will focus on one company and look at what has made it so successful, the company’s business strategy and what differentiates them from the competition. From a Telegraph Business Club perspective, the films are designed to be engaging, informative and interesting business insights for visitors and members of the club. That means each film will be compellingly narrated and will include interviews with senior executives in the business to identify the strategy and emphasising the passion within the company.[/FONT]
[FONT="] [/FONT]
[FONT="]If we can come up with a compelling feature and make the documentary, you will be provided with a digital copy of the film for your own marketing purposes. You may wish to place it on your own website, send it to your clients or use it for recruitment purposes, etc. However you choose to use it, you will no doubt find it a powerful endorsement for your business.[/FONT]
[FONT="] [/FONT]
[FONT="]We are making 15 films in this series. We have already committed to make 7 of those films with the following companies: Land Rover, City & Guilds of London, Proco, Office Depot, Botanix, Phonak and Constantine. We are looking for a further 8 companies to work with.[/FONT]
[FONT="] [/FONT]
[FONT="]Until recently, these films have only been offered to full sponsors of the Telegraph Business Club. But the Telegraph Business Club is now very keen to build on the popularity of the site’s video content.
[/FONT]
[FONT="]
[/FONT]
[FONT="]As a result, the 15 companies to feature in this series of films will not need to pay the full sponsorship fee.
[/FONT]
[FONT="][/FONT]
[FONT="]Is this the killer line guys:
[/FONT]
[FONT="][/FONT]
[FONT="]Instead they only need to cover the cost of creating the film. This cost will depend on the filming and production required, but an initial conversation will give us enough information so that we may provide a project estimate.[/FONT]
[FONT="] [/FONT]
The Telegraph Business Club is hugely supportive of the project, having seen the success of the previous films we have made. The client covers the cost of the film production and the distribution, but The Telegraph Business Club covers the cost of the in paper and online promotion.
[FONT="]
[/FONT]
[FONT="]We are contacting approximately 40 companies in this phase to find the additional 8 that we would like to make films about. We have agreed with the Telegraph Business Club that we will work on a first come first served basis. We will work with the first 8 companies we find to have good success stories and are happy to share in the costs of producing the films.[/FONT]
[FONT="] [/FONT]
[FONT="]Please call or email me as soon as possible with some suitable times for us to speak and to explore whether this is an opportunity worth pursuing.[/FONT]
[FONT="] [/FONT]
[FONT="]Kind Regards,[/FONT]
(Film Company - Names removed in case of legal mumbo jumbo)