Can a few guys proof read this for us?

[Dan]

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We need this proof reading (and possibly testing out when you're ready to post to the JOTM August).

Sometimes when you've worked on a thread like this over the space of a few days it's hard to see mistakes or whatever.

Seems alright for me. But there might be an instruction or word or whatever not quite right.

 

[WetSaw]

The only thing, for me, that doesn't seem right is "enter into". I think "enter" is fine on its own. Oh, and the fact that it's a bit long winded adding media now

 

[Alan.P]

Holy crap, talk about long winded, can we not do it the old way like on other forums wherein in the reply box there was an option to upload images straight from the computer into the thread ?

 

[AliGage]

@Dan link on the banner returns an error. Can't find the album. I've pm'd you.

 

[Dan]

Job Of The Month 8/2015

New album I've just created it.

I think we might have made it sound long winded.

You make an album. And stick pictures in it. You submit one image into the JOTM album, and in the description of that picture, link to your album you made before.

That's it in a sentence and it is actually as quick as adding 10 pictures to a thread on the old forum.

We've tried to describe the images and things and I think we've gone long winded because of the stages of adding an album etc which I've explained but perhaps didn't need to as it's not JOTM related? Maybe I split the info threads and like to how to make an album, and then separately explain how the competition submission works generally?

 

[Glynn]

Best bedtime reading for a long time

 

[Dave]

Dan waffle on ... Nah!!! Lol lol , never been known ..

 

[Sean Kelly]

Dan, it looks like you have done a lot of work on the subject. It reminds me of when I had to write documentation that would enable a person 'taken from off the street' to restore millions of pounds worth of data on a mainframe system. i.e. it had to be written in such a way that anybody (that could read English) could sit down and perform the task. It always started with the assumption that the person could also work a computer.

As your other reviews have said, it is a bit long winded! - Sorry, I started scrolling quite quickly to the end.

Your post #5 is better.